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Revision Scene 16: Cheese Wiz and Damsel Congeniality
A short scene that didn't require many drastic changes, except to correct some of my worst goofs about the practicalities of pre-modern cooking. Introducing two of my major secondary characters. I didn't notice much need for change, but I was surprised to see how far they'd both developed over the course of the story from my original (and mostly static) conception of them. I think that works, and I also think that following it consciously through the redraft is going to make it work a lot better. The extra year ought to help there, too.
Next scene is another of the big difficult revisions, as I have to deal with THE major secondary character now. I didn't handle her at all well in this arc of the story last time, because I had such an imperfect understanding of what was happening, and of what she would end up doing.
Next scene is another of the big difficult revisions, as I have to deal with THE major secondary character now. I didn't handle her at all well in this arc of the story last time, because I had such an imperfect understanding of what was happening, and of what she would end up doing.