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Heroic to the Core
Nov. 3rd, 2011 08:02 amKiller-Kate and Luke Lackland: 1,050 words. Kate gives the Duke both barrels.
Not loving this version of the Family Fight scene so far, since it is coming out as something very much like a Great Kate Coredump. I seem to have this problem with the first drafts of her epic speeches, though several have caught alight some way into the proceedings, and shown me unexpected ways forward.
She's going to be blasting right away for a good few paragraphs yet. I'll decide which ones I need to blast away in a month or three's time, if my master-plan stays on track. Probably rewrite most of the rest, too.
For now, I can only follow her into the fire...
Not loving this version of the Family Fight scene so far, since it is coming out as something very much like a Great Kate Coredump. I seem to have this problem with the first drafts of her epic speeches, though several have caught alight some way into the proceedings, and shown me unexpected ways forward.
She's going to be blasting right away for a good few paragraphs yet. I'll decide which ones I need to blast away in a month or three's time, if my master-plan stays on track. Probably rewrite most of the rest, too.
For now, I can only follow her into the fire...
