Revision: Politics Knocked Down

Killer-Kate and Luke Lackland: So I've finished knocking down all the bits of the political plot that don't make sense, and generating the brainstormy alternatives.  Now all I have to do is hammer the pieces of the New Plot into place, and prove that they fit.  If I've put the last month to proper use, this shouldn't be too drawn-out a processes.

It's about removing all the senseless plotty complications I can, and replacing them with consistent story complexity.

I'm too fried to even think about the Chocolate Story at present.