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Revision Scene 7: Dulce et Decorum Est
Jun. 27th, 2012 09:23 pmConsidering what happens here, the revised version ends up markedly less depressing than the original. Added some history and psychology, and have serious hopes that the result reads faster and shorter.
I planted the thing I was trying to plant yesterday.
The next scene is the one I spent a year, three years ago, compulsively avoiding writing. Nearly half of the most different tale possible got told just to be writing something other than this shoggoth-shagger*. After tomorrow, I ought to be sauntering uphill for a nice old while.
*No actual shoggoths were shagged in the drafting of this scene. No future shoggoths will be. Tekeli-li is not a good pick-up line. If it works, run away. May not apply in Palmer Land, Alberta, or Penge. Void where prohibited by quantum.
I planted the thing I was trying to plant yesterday.
The next scene is the one I spent a year, three years ago, compulsively avoiding writing. Nearly half of the most different tale possible got told just to be writing something other than this shoggoth-shagger*. After tomorrow, I ought to be sauntering uphill for a nice old while.
*No actual shoggoths were shagged in the drafting of this scene. No future shoggoths will be. Tekeli-li is not a good pick-up line. If it works, run away. May not apply in Palmer Land, Alberta, or Penge. Void where prohibited by quantum.
