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caper_estA second minor scene from Chapter 6 given its minor revision, while I try to puzzle out the remaining problems in the previous chapter. We'll see what I can do on my days off, today and tomorrow.
The omniscient viewpoint hasn't been shifting quite as smoothly from one character's focus to another's as I thought it was on the first write, or even when I was making my revision notes. I'm going to have to watch out for that.
The omniscient viewpoint hasn't been shifting quite as smoothly from one character's focus to another's as I thought it was on the first write, or even when I was making my revision notes. I'm going to have to watch out for that.
