Revision Scene 12: The Imitation of Katy
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caper_estIn a culture whose nearest best approach to a great redemptive figure would be either Bacchus or alt-Alexander, a penitent has to take her rôle models where she can find them - however ill they fit her...
A little cleaning up; a little removal of inexplicable character amnesia/insouciance/boneheadedness about what this ought to remind them of; and a bit of foreshadowing of something I had yet to discover, first time around, for at least another fifteen chapters.
Next comes the climax of the arc. I foresee a lot of time spent swearing at bad sketch-maps of the terrain where it happens. Action scenes are a bastard that way!
A little cleaning up; a little removal of inexplicable character amnesia/insouciance/boneheadedness about what this ought to remind them of; and a bit of foreshadowing of something I had yet to discover, first time around, for at least another fifteen chapters.
Next comes the climax of the arc. I foresee a lot of time spent swearing at bad sketch-maps of the terrain where it happens. Action scenes are a bastard that way!
